Siiigh, Spring Break is over and now I'm sitting her at school yet again. Had a mid-term this morning and probably didn't do very well. I have another exam tonight for Philosophy ><. Ugh... Spring Break was boring, but very relaxing and stuff. I slept in late and sat around a lot. I didn't get the stuff done that I wanted to and I'm angry at myself because of it =P. Blargh... I need to work on stuff. I have so much crap to finish, stories, pictures, projects, and junk like that. Oi vey....
A-Shift
I red a couple stories of yours: I like your style, even if I think it is strongly influenced by film storytelling and focuses more on the action itself than on charachter's thoughts and feelings. I don't know how good at drawing are you, but maybe your visual approach to the story would be perfect for a comic, and doing comics would also help you develop your writing attitudes.
I really liked "Thorne", that slightly reminds me of Blade's vampire hunters' organisation, and I think you should go on with the story and explore what a former hunter would do and her double loyalty and family bound issues.
Plus, what if her grandpa really turns to be a vampire and the traitor?
Good luck with your art and storytelling
KittyKat87
Thanks, I'm glad you liked my stories. I'll consider your suggestion (about the former hunter) for a possible spin-off series, and I have been thinking about doing comics. I'm already planning to make 'Thorne' a 3-part series, and I think I know who the traitor is going to be, but you may just have to wait and find out. ;) If you really wanna know, you can PM me and I'll tell you about it. ^_^
Also, if you'd like to see some of my art, you can go to either of these places:
http://kerrilark66.sheezyart.com/
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/top ic/807142/1